Wednesday, September 28, 2011

fat pigeon by Victoria

Haiku for the fat pigeon 

 When I saw this hole 
irresistible fat bird
 perched inside, oh my!
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5 comments:

  1. momSeptember 28, 2011 at 9:59 PM

    Oh wow V, very excellent. :)

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 28, 2011 at 10:44 PM

    V, that is very impressive to use irresistible in a sentence now I get to use that sentence for one of mine!!! thanks

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  3. AnonymousSeptember 29, 2011 at 3:42 PM

    I like fat pigeons. Nice catch Lilly.

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  4. ZiaSeptember 29, 2011 at 9:09 PM

    Loved it V, and the picture. My attempt @ Haiku (love writing them):

    Chubby little bird
    Why did you squeeze inside there?
    An Irresistible hole?

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  5. AnonymousOctober 16, 2011 at 6:40 PM

    I can't resist:

    Rock dove peers outside
    At the curious tourist
    With her camera.

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